Thanks again to Mr Disorder...... Thoughts.

Fantastic. A slight change of shade might nonetheless make the writing stand out just a bit more. Maybe you could match the writing colour with that of the antlers.

Oh aye, very good, although bottler Brown looks like staying put until he absolutely has to go. Hands up who voted for him??

Exactly.

It looks a little "loud" and also something chucked together and quite unprofessional to me. Sorry.

Also, we need to consider the ease, cost and effectiveness of reproducing it both in colour and in black and white so as not to get caught out later when trying to produce any material.